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The Killer's Feeling
Don't look at me
Please dont
You don't know what I see
My sky is dead
My shadow leaves
Friendships become unwanted
I can't walk no more
I'm the world's prevention
My face is dead and my spirit is haunted
The floor is invisible
Where is the sun when you need it
The dead walk around me laughing
Hell becomes heaven
My hands become heavy
My escape isn't death no more
I sit here stiff and tears are tortured
They feel sorry for me
Please don't look at me
My life becomes tragedy
Please dont
You don't know what I see
My sky is dead
My shadow leaves
Friendships become unwanted
I can't walk no more
I'm the world's prevention
My face is dead and my spirit is haunted
The floor is invisible
Where is the sun when you need it
The dead walk around me laughing
Hell becomes heaven
My hands become heavy
My escape isn't death no more
I sit here stiff and tears are tortured
They feel sorry for me
Please don't look at me
My life becomes tragedy
Published 26th Nov 2010
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26th Nov 2010 10:37pm
28th Nov 2010 7:37am
I really like this one, I especially like the line 'hell becomes heaven'
15th Apr 2012 10:24am
This poem is so well written. I have been there frequently..Felt the same way. Well done!
