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Waltzing Away
She danced
life was her floor
twirling and spinning
on everything she could
what happens when the girl you loved
is the woman you hate
how do you move past
a most undesirable fate
he danced
his floor was made of broken hearts
he would spin and twirl
nothing would sooth his empty soul
what happens when the boy you loved
turns into the man you never wanted
how do you let him know
how do you let him go
they danced
on a floor of destiny
twirling and spinning
away from each other
life was her floor
twirling and spinning
on everything she could
what happens when the girl you loved
is the woman you hate
how do you move past
a most undesirable fate
he danced
his floor was made of broken hearts
he would spin and twirl
nothing would sooth his empty soul
what happens when the boy you loved
turns into the man you never wanted
how do you let him know
how do you let him go
they danced
on a floor of destiny
twirling and spinning
away from each other
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Re: Waltzing Away
30th Jun 2013 8:02pm
oh...my...god...like...Nikki...!!!!...(i kinda have no words...but this was fucking magnificent...saving this...)
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Re: Waltzing Away
30th Jun 2013 8:45pm
Such beautiful sorrow. So relatable, although I'm not an old man yet, but time is blinding. Wonderfully done, Nikki!
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Re: Waltzing Away
30th Jun 2013 11:25pm
Excellent sadness Nikki-seems many lived in bound up hate for as long as they can stand it.."trying" valiant effort...and then the others resolve to live for their own personal quests.
stifling sadness You Pen-Perfectly!!!
stifling sadness You Pen-Perfectly!!!
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re: Re: Waltzing Away
1st Jul 2013 4:13am
Sad is easy for me to write, its the happy crap I have trouble with :)
Thanks Souladareatease
Thanks Souladareatease
Re: Waltzing Away
1st Jul 2013 3:49am
Damn. Broken glass and quicksand. Not the time for a knee slide. I am fond of emotional complexity, because past the bullshit it burns simple and clean. The past was golden. The present is no gift. Binary stars don't stop. Weighty for a brief piece. Much respect, Comrade!
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Anonymous
1st Jul 2013 4:09am
Excellent write....
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