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Abuser
I was supposed to post this on father's day but I was afraid to...not sure why...
Its a hell of day to think about
When my father beat my mom
Resulting in silent stagnant
Lifelong dram
Bare feet in shoes filled
Topbound with thumbtacks
Slit! Stab! Cut!
Is the pain up in my thorax
Had the nerve following
Thee to then leave her
Id have killed him off quick
Clean as a ceaser
Soiled his body then I
Woulda kept it truckin
9 fathers' days after
Wouldve meant nothing
Contrary what corrupts me
Is understanding
But im marked kinda bad
With this lifelong branding
Turned memory
Pain at its highest
Anger at its greatest
And torchure at its finest
Just a thought though
Nothing more or less
Im gonna need cranes and trucks
To re-clean this mess
Its a hell of day to think about
When my father beat my mom
Resulting in silent stagnant
Lifelong dram
Bare feet in shoes filled
Topbound with thumbtacks
Slit! Stab! Cut!
Is the pain up in my thorax
Had the nerve following
Thee to then leave her
Id have killed him off quick
Clean as a ceaser
Soiled his body then I
Woulda kept it truckin
9 fathers' days after
Wouldve meant nothing
Contrary what corrupts me
Is understanding
But im marked kinda bad
With this lifelong branding
Turned memory
Pain at its highest
Anger at its greatest
And torchure at its finest
Just a thought though
Nothing more or less
Im gonna need cranes and trucks
To re-clean this mess
Published 30th Jun 2013
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30th Jun 2013 4:05am
dude =/...
i'm reading listing this, because not only is it insanely well written, with words really popping out at me,
but i completely understand what you mean,
he'll get his, and i wish the best for you in many future father days to come...
i'm reading listing this, because not only is it insanely well written, with words really popping out at me,
but i completely understand what you mean,
he'll get his, and i wish the best for you in many future father days to come...
30th Jun 2013 4:16am
Thankyou so much Lacey...for your wishes, reads and listing...you really do make a difference...this was painful to write...
30th Jun 2013 5:44am
30th Jun 2013 6:25am
30th Jun 2013 6:53am
DAMN! Just DAMN! Thank you for sharing such a bitter story, that many can relate to. Maybe this write can help someone who is currently in an abusive relationship. Never know! Anyway, you did an amazing job on delivering an heart wrenching read! Xoxo
Pen Praise~
Pen Praise~
30th Jun 2013 12:06pm
30th Jun 2013 5:08pm
Goodness thankyou so much Hashman and Rain...i appreciate you so much...I'm so happy that all of you can relate...your compliments inspire me to the fullest and peace on to you Bro...
30th Jun 2013 8:22pm
Damn man!!! This has touched my soul, thanks for sharing this magnificent poetry.
30th Jun 2013 8:33pm
30th Jun 2013 9:16pm
I know this feeling brother and I'm sorry you do too. Good job on capturing the emotions
30th Jun 2013 9:18pm
Anonymous
1st Jul 2013 00:29am
Brought back some painful memories...excellent write! x
1st Jul 2013 00:33am
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