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River Rocks
River rocks under my feet the water ripples
and my reflection becomes blurry I'm in up
to my ankles
tadpoles scurry around wondering what I
am and I ask myself the same thing thinking
long and hard then forgetting the question
I walk in deeper with my arms out to the
side not sure if I'm doing it for balance or
because the water is chilly, probably both
waist deep I stop and try to convince myself
to go all the way under so I close my eyes
and inhale deeply
I catch a hint of pachouli as the air shifts
and then citrus from my shampoo fills my nose
through the gentle breeze
listening to my surroundings I hear the flow
of the river, the sound of laughter in the distance,
a wood pecker drilling a tree
I exhale and remember someone saying once
"in with the good, out with the bad"and I feel
new again
opening my eyes I look around and see life
and realize it's pretty good then think about
my favorite quote
"there's two day's of the week I don't worry
about, yesterday and tomorrow, "then I sink
to the bottom of the river bed
and my reflection becomes blurry I'm in up
to my ankles
tadpoles scurry around wondering what I
am and I ask myself the same thing thinking
long and hard then forgetting the question
I walk in deeper with my arms out to the
side not sure if I'm doing it for balance or
because the water is chilly, probably both
waist deep I stop and try to convince myself
to go all the way under so I close my eyes
and inhale deeply
I catch a hint of pachouli as the air shifts
and then citrus from my shampoo fills my nose
through the gentle breeze
listening to my surroundings I hear the flow
of the river, the sound of laughter in the distance,
a wood pecker drilling a tree
I exhale and remember someone saying once
"in with the good, out with the bad"and I feel
new again
opening my eyes I look around and see life
and realize it's pretty good then think about
my favorite quote
"there's two day's of the week I don't worry
about, yesterday and tomorrow, "then I sink
to the bottom of the river bed
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Re: River Rocks
30th Jun 2013 00:41am
Such a relese all throughout...your words are like postivie nature themselves...i loved this...
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30th Jun 2013 1:12am
Much appreciated BLaccZacc, thank you for reading and your wonderful comment! ;)
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Anonymous
- Edited 30th Jun 2013 4:10am
30th Jun 2013 1:36am
I am truly loving the nature pieces you are writing lately. The rebirth symbolism is fantastic in this one. We just ended a 102 degree day and your writing has refreshed me ;) Thank you!
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30th Jun 2013 3:16am
Thank you so much lerdgoin...meditation is helping me...otherwise I'd be a wreck ;)
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30th Jun 2013 4:09am
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Anonymous
30th Jun 2013 4:12am
I feel an OMMMMMMMM coming on :) I need to meditate more as well...I've toyed with the idea of learning Tai Chi...it looks so peaceful.
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Anonymous
30th Jun 2013 3:27am
This poem is soothing tl...strider
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30th Jun 2013 3:32am
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30th Jun 2013 8:30am
Love the quote at the end ... I may have to add that to my profile ...
... LSP
... LSP
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30th Jun 2013 2:38pm
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30th Jun 2013 2:04pm
I too love that end quote but so too do I love this entire
wonderfully woved ink!
wonderfully woved ink!
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30th Jun 2013 4:29pm
thought for a minute you might do a Splash and be a mermaid girl hehehe...
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30th Jun 2013 5:01pm
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30th Jun 2013 4:39pm
Soothing poem - reminiscent of some shampoo ads with lush nature backgrounds.
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30th Jun 2013 5:02pm
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Anonymous
12th Sep 2013 4:19am
So tadpoles are gettin more action than I am when it comes to your toes?
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