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The Lust Stand
A lustre a little,impetuous a wind,
Vindictive to my sleep,my night queen.
Gleaming knife,golden edges sharp,
Thirsty you are too,
Desires,enigmatically tough.
Try I to cut myself,
But you never give up.
Misty lake gloryfying the night sky
Lusty blood o' mine,
slipping to flow inside!
Vindictive to my sleep,my night queen.
Gleaming knife,golden edges sharp,
Thirsty you are too,
Desires,enigmatically tough.
Try I to cut myself,
But you never give up.
Misty lake gloryfying the night sky
Lusty blood o' mine,
slipping to flow inside!
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Re: The Lust Stand
28th Jun 2013 6:45pm
Thirsty you are too,
Desires,enigmatically tough.
Try I to cut myself,
But you never give up.
seduction!!!
Desires,enigmatically tough.
Try I to cut myself,
But you never give up.
seduction!!!
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Re: The Lust Stand
28th Jun 2013 11:52pm
You are so darn gifted!
This piece is brilliant!
Simplicity making a beautiful and powerful story!
Pen Praise~
This piece is brilliant!
Simplicity making a beautiful and powerful story!
Pen Praise~
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29th Jun 2013 7:22am
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29th Jun 2013 1:12am
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re: Re: The Lust Stand
29th Jun 2013 7:23am
Thanks Amanecio.I tried to paint erotic content beautifully in this poem.
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