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AS IS
CONFUSED
I NEED
A COOKIE
NO
I NEED
A KISS
NO
ALL I
REALLY NEED
AND WANT
IS THIS
ONE GOOD
TRUE HEART
TO HOLD ME
IN WARM
SIMPLE BLISS
WHISPERING
I LOVE YOU
AND ACCEPT YOU
AS IS
Written by
OyateInyanNajin
Published 27th Jun 2013
| Edited 21st Feb 2021
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Re: AS IS
27th Jun 2013 8:05am
re: Re: AS IS
27th Jun 2013 5:55pm
Thank you Tyvm syn!...
(& for the longest time, I used to self-centeredly think & believe it was just me, who could never seem to get 'it' (that romantic ideal)quite right!...)
~ OIN
(& for the longest time, I used to self-centeredly think & believe it was just me, who could never seem to get 'it' (that romantic ideal)quite right!...)
~ OIN
Re: AS IS
Anonymous
27th Jun 2013 8:42am
Pure words in a humble poem, much enjoyed!
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re: Re: AS IS
27th Jun 2013 5:59pm
Thank you very much L.Q., I'm happy to hear you enjoyed it & thank you for your lovely response to it!...
~ OIN
~ OIN
Re: AS IS
Anonymous
27th Jun 2013 8:46am
Me too again oin... strider!
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re: Re: AS IS
Thanks Strider!...
Yeah, I've got a sneaking suspicion that this recurrent, re-cyclic feeling of hungry inner longing, which has arisen & lingered for painfully long periods of time throughout my life (between the not so frequent & seldom as long lasting, sporadic, episodic occasions of seemingly fuller, joint-human love-connections, i.e. - "relationships"), is or must be, a common theme & universal symptom suffered, for most every living human being, at least at some point in their lives?!...
Aside from LIFE itself, this must truly be that other, darker, more notorious 'Circle Game', that no one ever warned me about, but that I apparently & obviously (at this point!) had to find out about & experience (ad nauseam on my own!!!?... Or to borrow & use an excerpted line from an old Joni Mitchell song titled 'Same Situation' (off 'Court and Spark'), which seems to capture & echo some parallel sense of that feeling: "again and again the same situation for so many years"...
...(Oh well, "Cest la Vie!"...)
~ OIN
Yeah, I've got a sneaking suspicion that this recurrent, re-cyclic feeling of hungry inner longing, which has arisen & lingered for painfully long periods of time throughout my life (between the not so frequent & seldom as long lasting, sporadic, episodic occasions of seemingly fuller, joint-human love-connections, i.e. - "relationships"), is or must be, a common theme & universal symptom suffered, for most every living human being, at least at some point in their lives?!...
Aside from LIFE itself, this must truly be that other, darker, more notorious 'Circle Game', that no one ever warned me about, but that I apparently & obviously (at this point!) had to find out about & experience (ad nauseam on my own!!!?... Or to borrow & use an excerpted line from an old Joni Mitchell song titled 'Same Situation' (off 'Court and Spark'), which seems to capture & echo some parallel sense of that feeling: "again and again the same situation for so many years"...
...(Oh well, "Cest la Vie!"...)
~ OIN
Re: AS IS
Anonymous
27th Jun 2013 6:59pm
Sweet poem, but I I think
I need some chocolate...cookie,]
kiss...that can wait;)
I need some chocolate...cookie,]
kiss...that can wait;)
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re: Re: AS IS
Thanks A.D., yeah, so very true!...
It took me a few moments after I first began to feel my usual hunger pangs & sudden cravings for dark chocolate, cookies, sweets, etc., before my craving gradually switched gears into thinking - 'no... i need a kiss' (instead), then from that first dawning of my (sugar numbed-out)realization into my sudden awareness of the true root of all my collective physical, emotional & psychological cravings, in truth being the deeper, more profoundly nurturing, essential human necessity & need of simple, natural, fundamental human touch, warmth, understanding, intimacy, unconditional acceptance & love, which so clearly was the gaping hole in & the greatest missing element of my life at that time!...
'Now', at least I know, but that said, even knowing isn't always enough to bring about such vital, urgent change!!!...
Woe be the many perils & throes, amongst the scarcer pleasures and joys of we human beings...at times!...
~ OIN
It took me a few moments after I first began to feel my usual hunger pangs & sudden cravings for dark chocolate, cookies, sweets, etc., before my craving gradually switched gears into thinking - 'no... i need a kiss' (instead), then from that first dawning of my (sugar numbed-out)realization into my sudden awareness of the true root of all my collective physical, emotional & psychological cravings, in truth being the deeper, more profoundly nurturing, essential human necessity & need of simple, natural, fundamental human touch, warmth, understanding, intimacy, unconditional acceptance & love, which so clearly was the gaping hole in & the greatest missing element of my life at that time!...
'Now', at least I know, but that said, even knowing isn't always enough to bring about such vital, urgent change!!!...
Woe be the many perils & throes, amongst the scarcer pleasures and joys of we human beings...at times!...
~ OIN
Re: AS IS
12th Aug 2013 10:59pm