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The Human Zoo
A confidence builder
that was what she needed.
Maybe a toke
in the back room
where the smell
never stains.
A sip from the jug
where it's hid
in the pantry.
She could hike up her skirt
or roll down her top
and spoil the whole mystery
of what she's made of.
He arrived at the door
with his whiskers unshaven
not turning off the car
for fear it wouldn't restart.
His shirt had a hole
and his belt loops were worn;
his shoes were not new
and his hair was uncombed.
When you don't know
or can't know
or haven't known
you don't know.
"You look pretty," he said.
She smiled back
and reached for his hand
and felt a world better.
runningturtle87
that was what she needed.
Maybe a toke
in the back room
where the smell
never stains.
A sip from the jug
where it's hid
in the pantry.
She could hike up her skirt
or roll down her top
and spoil the whole mystery
of what she's made of.
He arrived at the door
with his whiskers unshaven
not turning off the car
for fear it wouldn't restart.
His shirt had a hole
and his belt loops were worn;
his shoes were not new
and his hair was uncombed.
When you don't know
or can't know
or haven't known
you don't know.
"You look pretty," he said.
She smiled back
and reached for his hand
and felt a world better.
runningturtle87
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27th Jun 2013 2:15am
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27th Jun 2013 2:45am
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27th Jun 2013 2:46am
Back in the day, the little things were so very powerful...before...HottNess.
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27th Jun 2013 5:58am
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Anonymous
27th Jun 2013 4:56am
This. Too much emphasis on exterior when the person who could be the most important person you've ever met is a few pounds or a wardrobe away. Perfect...
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27th Jun 2013 6:01am
Bahzacktly, and we might be just what the doctor ordered, warts and all, and so we ourselves need that confidence the know that what we have to offer counts. Yes, PM, thanks.
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27th Jun 2013 6:56am
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27th Jun 2013 10:47am
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Anonymous
27th Jun 2013 10:11am
moving sentiment expressed throughout-you kept it easy going and added to the depths..great work :-)
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