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Pig boy
was at the store yesterday
shopping for bread and eggs
spotted a little boy
looking into the freezer
he was concentrating so hard
thought his thoughts where written all on the meat
wiped his nose a time or two
with the back of his hand and stained fingers
no adults in sight
he looked over at me
but said nothing
so I went and joined him
felt odd staring at meat
it felt like I was looking into a cows nightmare
and a pigs dream
reached into my pocket and gave the boy a tissue
he took it
said nothing
I asked "where's your parents"
he shrugged
no sis or bother?
just a shrug
asked him why he was staring at meat
he shrugged
odd boy
longing for meat
and never uttering a word
then a little old man came walking up
he growled that smokers growl
hey boy
lets get going
grandma ain't got no time to wait
for your pig headed fat ass
boy just said alright grandpa
but he looked up at me and said
thank you ma'm
and then waddled away
I could hear his grand dad
cursing him
calling him stupid
all the way into an old Oldsmobile
watched it spin away
staring at its tire marks
stood there awile just thinking
"a cows nightmare"
"a pigs dream"
shopping for bread and eggs
spotted a little boy
looking into the freezer
he was concentrating so hard
thought his thoughts where written all on the meat
wiped his nose a time or two
with the back of his hand and stained fingers
no adults in sight
he looked over at me
but said nothing
so I went and joined him
felt odd staring at meat
it felt like I was looking into a cows nightmare
and a pigs dream
reached into my pocket and gave the boy a tissue
he took it
said nothing
I asked "where's your parents"
he shrugged
no sis or bother?
just a shrug
asked him why he was staring at meat
he shrugged
odd boy
longing for meat
and never uttering a word
then a little old man came walking up
he growled that smokers growl
hey boy
lets get going
grandma ain't got no time to wait
for your pig headed fat ass
boy just said alright grandpa
but he looked up at me and said
thank you ma'm
and then waddled away
I could hear his grand dad
cursing him
calling him stupid
all the way into an old Oldsmobile
watched it spin away
staring at its tire marks
stood there awile just thinking
"a cows nightmare"
"a pigs dream"
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Re: Pig boy
26th Jun 2013 6:01am
Wonderful snapshot of those two!
"he was concentrating so hard
thought his thoughts where written all on the meat"
Clever bit, that...
:)
"he was concentrating so hard
thought his thoughts where written all on the meat"
Clever bit, that...
:)
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Re: Pig boy
26th Jun 2013 7:47am
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26th Jun 2013 2:32pm
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Anonymous
26th Jun 2013 9:28am
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26th Jun 2013 2:33pm
Was weird this write! Had to put it into words. The little boy hit my soft spot. Wanted to take him home anyways Ty gabe xoxo
Re: Pig boy
26th Jun 2013 4:24pm
Re: Pig boy
27th Jun 2013 1:40am
kept starin thinkin
wait for it, wait for it... then
came away thinkin the whole piece was a stare
tire tracks included
got me
wait for it, wait for it... then
came away thinkin the whole piece was a stare
tire tracks included
got me
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Anonymous
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29th Jun 2013 9:21am
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Re: Pig boy
29th Jun 2013 7:15pm
Re: Pig boy
30th Jun 2013 12:50pm
This was a brilliant bit of observation about the human condition. The fact that it caught you and you recorded it with such poignancy shows how much soul you've got. It reminded me a lot of Southern Gothic. A flat, matter-of-fact telling, but vibrant and pulsing with meaning and feeling beneath.
While you never told how you felt, you showed the shit out of it, and that was awesome.
Really cool piece, GiGi.
(Two little spelling pickies:
Thoughts where... were
awile ... a while, or awhile)
Again, cool piece.
B
While you never told how you felt, you showed the shit out of it, and that was awesome.
Really cool piece, GiGi.
(Two little spelling pickies:
Thoughts where... were
awile ... a while, or awhile)
Again, cool piece.
B
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re: Re: Pig boy
5th Jul 2013 2:34pm
Re: Pig boy
I enjoyed this very much.I love the odd,or different.That's what you delivered.
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6th Jul 2013 9:25am
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Anonymous
7th Jul 2013 8:46am
I had an Oldsmobile once. . .loved your last stanza, btw. . .Brilliant!! Pig on, BFF:)
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Re: Pig boy
Anonymous
5th Nov 2013 1:34am
Wow this gave me chills.
Gg you were able to portray so much depth in such simplistic form, poignantly thoughtful !!
Impressive! Taking it to my list.
Gg you were able to portray so much depth in such simplistic form, poignantly thoughtful !!
Impressive! Taking it to my list.
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7th Nov 2013 4:46am
Re: Pig boy
Gg i'd never read this one from you great in the telling had me in the market with these characters mesmerized.. masterful writing beautiful lady.. If I wasn't so far over my reading list limit this would definitely be an add.. peace Crim :)
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Re: Pig boy
11th Apr 2014 7:37am
I love the captured moment that you pick up in this poem. Hate that this has to be a true image of humanity but it is important to display
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