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≈Our World≈
Mother earth so beautiful
she gives us a place to
crash
we piss and moan and
fill her full of
trash
her trees and plants so
precious to us
all
but we cut them down
sit and watch them
fall
she gives us her beauty
not wanting
much
all we do is abuse her
with every
touch
she's fighting to stay
in one complete
piece
she may not make it
she's about to
decrease
wanting to do something
make a
change
if we come together
imagine our
range
let's do our part for
our home our
place
otherwise all of us
will be lost in
space
she gives us a place to
crash
we piss and moan and
fill her full of
trash
her trees and plants so
precious to us
all
but we cut them down
sit and watch them
fall
she gives us her beauty
not wanting
much
all we do is abuse her
with every
touch
she's fighting to stay
in one complete
piece
she may not make it
she's about to
decrease
wanting to do something
make a
change
if we come together
imagine our
range
let's do our part for
our home our
place
otherwise all of us
will be lost in
space
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Re: ≈Our World≈
26th Jun 2013 3:32am
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26th Jun 2013 3:39am
Thank you poetikmind...
Every year we plant a tree, I know that's not a lot but it's something, and maybe teaching kids a little bit at the same time! ; )
Every year we plant a tree, I know that's not a lot but it's something, and maybe teaching kids a little bit at the same time! ; )
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26th Jun 2013 3:44am
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Anonymous
26th Jun 2013 5:51am
I love this side of you! Beautiful plea from one mother in proxy for mother earth. I read your comment about planting a tree...you're doing more than most.Thank you for bringing these thoughts to the the forefront of my mind :)
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26th Jun 2013 2:37pm
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Anonymous
26th Jun 2013 11:25am
A beautiful true write tl!
strider!
strider!
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26th Jun 2013 2:39pm
Re: ≈Our World≈
26th Jun 2013 2:27pm
True that Tommie, a billion little differences can help make a big difference.
Very well said.
Very well said.
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26th Jun 2013 2:40pm
Re: ≈Our World≈
27th Jun 2013 9:28pm
we are the harbingers of its apocalypse or the the groundbreakings of its eternal continuum.
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27th Jun 2013 10:17pm