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My Ocean Blue
Love for the ocean
is like no other
my thoughts are
drowning into
the deep blue
bubbles escape
and rush to the
surface
I long to return
where the waves
crash over me
pull me under
taking me back
to the place I
come from
the place I belong
walking isn't for
me but gliding
through the
water is
Soaring past the
corroded rocks
and the sea life,
tasting the salty
water when I
lick my lips,
swimming with
the seals again
that's what I
need, my ocean
blue
is like no other
my thoughts are
drowning into
the deep blue
bubbles escape
and rush to the
surface
I long to return
where the waves
crash over me
pull me under
taking me back
to the place I
come from
the place I belong
walking isn't for
me but gliding
through the
water is
Soaring past the
corroded rocks
and the sea life,
tasting the salty
water when I
lick my lips,
swimming with
the seals again
that's what I
need, my ocean
blue
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Re: My Ocean Blue
Anonymous
25th Jun 2013 2:30am
Deep-sea write tl...
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Anonymous
- Edited 25th Jun 2013 5:31am
25th Jun 2013 5:14am
The beach is where I go to feel small...contrasted by the sheer awesome power and enormity of the ocean. It's a wonderful place to dream and sit peacefully drinking it all in.
A beautiful piece about longing for home :)
A beautiful piece about longing for home :)
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25th Jun 2013 11:45am
Yea, the deep blue sea... A very magical place to be!
love imagery n flow in this lady :)
love imagery n flow in this lady :)
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Re: My Ocean Blue
Anonymous
26th Jun 2013 2:51am
Wouldn't it be cool to be a mermaid/man! I love the beach at night with a cool breeze blowing, the waves crashing the most powerful yet peaceful sound
Thank you for evoking such beautiful images
Thank you for evoking such beautiful images
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