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It Started With A Stroke
Gentle strokes from fingertips
reach inside wet desires
delicate pink petals open
to soft tickling touch
wanting to fulfill the need
of exploring til explosion
steady beats of thrusting
and pushing togetherness
melding as one we start
to make love
sensual excitement ravishes
through us
we cherish the heat we
create letting liquid run
reach inside wet desires
delicate pink petals open
to soft tickling touch
wanting to fulfill the need
of exploring til explosion
steady beats of thrusting
and pushing togetherness
melding as one we start
to make love
sensual excitement ravishes
through us
we cherish the heat we
create letting liquid run
Published 24th Jun 2013
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Anonymous
24th Jun 2013 11:10pm
Hot write!
25th Jun 2013 00:43am
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Anonymous
- Edited 24th Jun 2013 11:27pm
24th Jun 2013 11:23pm
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25th Jun 2013 00:45am
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25th Jun 2013 00:46am
25th Jun 2013 00:31am
Damn this is hott, got my mind 'seeing' the mess created lol
As usual, an excellent inking lady! :)
As usual, an excellent inking lady! :)
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Anonymous
25th Jun 2013 2:27am
well done write tl...strider
25th Jun 2013 2:32am
25th Jun 2013 6:38am
The pic (from Rodin statue The Kiss) reinforces the poem. Favorite lines : first two, the next build up.
25th Jun 2013 2:37pm
Anonymous
25th Jun 2013 2:52pm
tommie,
Sometimes it's the lightest of strokes that are the most intense ; ) Thank you for sharing your strokes here! ; )
tornado
Sometimes it's the lightest of strokes that are the most intense ; ) Thank you for sharing your strokes here! ; )
tornado
25th Jun 2013 2:56pm
tornado,
I enjoy the light strokes...very intense! ;-) It's my pleasure!
Glad you enjoyed ; )
tommie
I enjoy the light strokes...very intense! ;-) It's my pleasure!
Glad you enjoyed ; )
tommie
25th Jun 2013 5:00pm
25th Jun 2013 5:31pm
