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jam tame
i wanna
but my bra strap hurts.
i'm not busting out because of big tits
it's because of all the things
i hide in there.
but my bra strap hurts.
i'm not busting out because of big tits
it's because of all the things
i hide in there.
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Re: jam tame
25th Jun 2013 7:32am
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25th Jun 2013 7:47am
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25th Jun 2013 7:48am
I mean, other than that, it's very straight forward, yes, and...dull as hell but hey, that's life, and i've been drinking tonight but hey...
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25th Jun 2013 12:58pm
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Re: jam tame
25th Jun 2013 1:53pm
Your poems are constantly leading me to wonder what the more figurative meaning is, even though they can be ultimately direct and straightforward. Nice work.
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25th Jun 2013 4:44pm
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25th Jun 2013 4:47pm
Lacey, you have a terrific understated sense of humor and the gift of saying so much in so few words. Terrific job!
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