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" Enlightenment Intensive
Cut through the ego and false beliefs
systems that trap you in suffering.8daysOntario.
Join44 people are going to True Awakening -
8 Day Enlightenment..."
==================================================
give unto me yOur 8day'fate[&or]faith ,
w'ill deliver [to] ontariola trap yr suff'ring
~44people AreGoing to
TrueAwakening~ \ cosmique commerce
truereal daskapital
factola d'spiritu
sancti -
Sam&Sarah to
be re'solved/re'fined , as seen
in d'current issuance of
InlitenmentWeekly \
Ego
will disappear
wit'out
yr even knowing it went an y wh'ere / painlessly
painlesslypainlessly
painlessly/ into&with every piss is guaranteed bliss /
\wee will suck the very'life outta all yOur FalseBeliefs \
joyhappy joyjoy
~~ a Painless Cut A'bove The Rest ~~
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Published 24th Jun 2013
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25th Jun 2013 1:26am
i just read on your page you're from brooklyn ny?
if that's true, that's pretty crazy because for some reason your style or writing has always reminded me of hubert selby, jr
ever read him?
if that's true, that's pretty crazy because for some reason your style or writing has always reminded me of hubert selby, jr
ever read him?
25th Jun 2013 3:32am
yes---
...&Last Exit To Brooklyn I read as a teen & Requiem sometime later
enjoyed both the movies
interesting I remind ye of him....haven't revisited either of those books since longlong ago, but I recall pretty gritty style.
He was born 2 years before my Dad in NY....Selby joined Merchant Maritime Service in '47, Dad in '48...not that they ever met...Hubert don't seem like kinda dude my Dad woulda been prone to befriend.....
...&Last Exit To Brooklyn I read as a teen & Requiem sometime later
enjoyed both the movies
interesting I remind ye of him....haven't revisited either of those books since longlong ago, but I recall pretty gritty style.
He was born 2 years before my Dad in NY....Selby joined Merchant Maritime Service in '47, Dad in '48...not that they ever met...Hubert don't seem like kinda dude my Dad woulda been prone to befriend.....
28th Jun 2013 7:21am
yeah he seems out there, you defiantly have a much cheerier tone and maintain a whole lot of originality =]
but before i saw that on your page... just the way you have such, as you said about him a "gritty" style, all the breaks and ways you mash words...
just in a little bit of a way reminded me of him. thought it was kinda funny youre from there...
point though, sorry to ramble lol, your work is crazy good
i am also from new york, and i've always said, you can take the newyorker out of new york but you can't take new york out of the newyorker =].
but before i saw that on your page... just the way you have such, as you said about him a "gritty" style, all the breaks and ways you mash words...
just in a little bit of a way reminded me of him. thought it was kinda funny youre from there...
point though, sorry to ramble lol, your work is crazy good
i am also from new york, and i've always said, you can take the newyorker out of new york but you can't take new york out of the newyorker =].
28th Jun 2013 2:12pm
