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Concert Time~
I've been
Damaged by love
ripped apart into pieces,
cradled then tossed aside.
Now what do I do,
Flirting with time
seems to be the right thing.
I'll be Free fallin' making
no promises to anyone
I'm living for me.
You can bet that I won't
back down from any
challenge, I will except.
While some of you are
Learning to fly I've won
my wings already.
Sometimes I feel like I'm
running down a dream
with different paths to
explore.
You wreck me then want
to comfort me all night
until the break of day.
You don't know how it
feels you're in a world
of your own.
I've had a Big weekend
and tonight I'm ending
it with a bang.
I'm getting down with
Tom Petty, he's going
to rock my socks
off.
Damaged by love
ripped apart into pieces,
cradled then tossed aside.
Now what do I do,
Flirting with time
seems to be the right thing.
I'll be Free fallin' making
no promises to anyone
I'm living for me.
You can bet that I won't
back down from any
challenge, I will except.
While some of you are
Learning to fly I've won
my wings already.
Sometimes I feel like I'm
running down a dream
with different paths to
explore.
You wreck me then want
to comfort me all night
until the break of day.
You don't know how it
feels you're in a world
of your own.
I've had a Big weekend
and tonight I'm ending
it with a bang.
I'm getting down with
Tom Petty, he's going
to rock my socks
off.
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Re: Concert Time~
23rd Jun 2013 4:07pm
Yea but won't Tom Petty be a 'heartbreaker' too? lmao just kidding had to show his group some love as well lol
good inking :)
good inking :)
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23rd Jun 2013 5:58pm
I'm so excited...I'm so in love with Tom Petty!It's going to be awesome!Thanks poetikmind!
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23rd Jun 2013 5:59pm
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Anonymous
23rd Jun 2013 6:09pm
a refuge-write tl...petty rocks!
strider
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23rd Jun 2013 6:11pm
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Anonymous
23rd Jun 2013 7:20pm
You are so lucky!! I am a huge Tom Petty fan!! I am pretty jealous. I love how you incorporated his lyrics into your piece, 'cause I know "you're a good girl that's crazy about Elvis...";)

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23rd Jun 2013 7:43pm
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Anonymous
23rd Jun 2013 9:20pm
I can't wait to see them...I knew you'd be a Mr, The King fan;)

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Anonymous
24th Jun 2013 3:44pm
tommielynn,
Rock them socks off!!! Cool write!
tornado
Rock them socks off!!! Cool write!
tornado

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24th Jun 2013 4:32pm
Thank you tornado...
let's just say Tom got to the point...I rolled another joint!
He was amazing!!Next up....Doobie Brothers ;)
let's just say Tom got to the point...I rolled another joint!
He was amazing!!Next up....Doobie Brothers ;)
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24th Jun 2013 4:33pm
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24th Jun 2013 10:37pm
dang you read my mind I was thinking of doing a poem like this but was afraid people would yell copy-foul....heheh
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