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Re: Out Of Sight III "The End Game"
22nd Jun 2013 11:06pm
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22nd Jun 2013 11:27pm
Hahah Well what can I say, I had to teach a lesson haha Thanks Magda sorry about the glasses, you forgot about the "hosepipe alert!" lol
Red
Red
Re: Out Of Sight III "The End Game"
22nd Jun 2013 11:19pm
Good Gawd Woman! You are 'Out of sight' when it comes to putting a feel-good-hurt on us! My vision is blurred from this intoxicating ink!
What a way to end the game! :)
What a way to end the game! :)
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re: Re: Out Of Sight III "The End Game"
22nd Jun 2013 11:30pm
lol Rain I was issued a silent challenge and I could not pass it up lol glad you like it, I am trying to make it easier on the eyes though. Thanks!
Red
Red
Re: Out Of Sight III "The End Game"
23rd Jun 2013 00:30am
Smokin' up the joint with Your fire!!!
Classy sensual and steamy-Beautiful intense write Dear Red!!!
Classy sensual and steamy-Beautiful intense write Dear Red!!!
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re: Re: Out Of Sight III "The End Game"
23rd Jun 2013 00:48am
Lol Soul did you get it all out? Lol Thank you hon for the extremely sweet comment, I appreciate it! :-)
Red
Red
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23rd Jun 2013 1:26am
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24th Jun 2013 7:21pm
Re: Out Of Sight III "The End Game"
23rd Jun 2013 00:41am
I love this! Very well written. I love the picture that goes with it. I have to say just reading a little bit caught my eye!
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re: Re: Out Of Sight III "The End Game"
23rd Jun 2013 00:51am
Thank you very much so happy you enjoyed this piece, its always nice to see new faces.
Red
Red
Re: Out Of Sight III "The End Game"
Anonymous
23rd Jun 2013 3:21am
ohhh The pain/pleasure this scribe emanates has the wolf howling at the Brooklyn Moon...you made him swoon to the tune of your erotica...but soon there will be a feeding...hahaa...yes Red..this was outstanding in presentation and delivery. And I'm diggin the pics as well...I see you keep that pen on tap..love it!!!
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re: Re: Out Of Sight III "The End Game"
23rd Jun 2013 3:38am
Swooning, howling and feeding hmm a whole lot of stuff going on lol thanks Naajir, glad you liked it.
Red
Red
Re: Out Of Sight III "The End Game"
Anonymous
23rd Jun 2013 3:25am
Smoking' write red...strider!
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23rd Jun 2013 3:39am
Re: Out Of Sight III "The End Game"
Anonymous
23rd Jun 2013 11:24am
Aesomely hot-sensual and clever write-great read, red :-)
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re: Re: Out Of Sight III "The End Game"
23rd Jun 2013 1:01pm
Re: Out Of Sight III "The End Game"
23rd Jun 2013 12:30pm
Whoa!! I feel like I just watch a ZANE episode!! lol
So awesomely hott n sensual... U were challenged by someone ?? hhhmmmm I feel sorry for him lol
So awesomely hott n sensual... U were challenged by someone ?? hhhmmmm I feel sorry for him lol
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re: Re: Out Of Sight III "The End Game"
23rd Jun 2013 12:54pm
You soo nosey get up out my kool-aid! lolol Did you get worked up baby? Want me to blow on it and make it better? lolol Thanks Poe, you are too funny!
Red
Red
Re: Out Of Sight III "The End Game"
23rd Jun 2013 9:48pm
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23rd Jun 2013 9:59pm
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23rd Jun 2013 10:44pm
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24th Jun 2013 00:49am
Re: Out Of Sight III "The End Game"
25th Jun 2013 7:08am
I believe I'm late for the party, yet somehow I was compelled to join because the menu on the platter was tempting! Very irresistible my friend, if I may add...mucho gusto!
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re: Re: Out Of Sight III "The End Game"
25th Jun 2013 11:40am
Thank you my sweet friend I am thrilled it was to your liking, "es un placer" :-)
Red
Red