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SMOKER IN LOVE

he lit up
at the sight
of her

Written by dartford

(Paul S...)

Published 21st Jun 2013

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Re: SMOKER IN LOVE

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22nd Jun 2013 1:22am

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Re: SMOKER IN LOVE

22nd Jun 2013 1:31am

Thanks. I'm using fewer words, but like the cigarettes I just can't totally quit!

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Re: SMOKER IN LOVE

23rd Jun 2013 12:58pm

Very short, not much for me to offer crit-wise. I love the double meaning of the piece. Clever. Thanks for sharing. :)

Peace, Indie

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Re: SMOKER IN LOVE

17th Jul 2013 6:52pm

I agree. The double entendre makes this poem exquisite(ly terse).

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Re: SMOKER IN LOVE

3rd Sep 2014 4:30pm

i think your short lil poems are brilliant man

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4th Sep 2014 00:16am

I think I have a short attention
span..:)

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