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FILL ME UP
(an old poem of mine, back by request...)
Fill me up,
in my mouth
let it throb
while i swallow it
up and down
in and out
sideways halfway
wholly completely
No need for rhythm...
Fill me up,
with the sound
of your heavy
breathing
and of your moans
and groans
let it pour
let it roar
let it soar
No need for music...
Fill me up,
with all of those
beautiful-terrible words
of love and hate,
your dirty fantasies
savage profanities
our shared unspoken
movements of madness
and ecstacy
No need for reasons...
Just fill me up--
Fill up my mind
my cunt
my empty aching womb
my mouth
my hungry restless soul
my palm
my angry yearning fingers
my heart...
All I need is you.
Fill me up,
in my mouth
let it throb
while i swallow it
up and down
in and out
sideways halfway
wholly completely
No need for rhythm...
Fill me up,
with the sound
of your heavy
breathing
and of your moans
and groans
let it pour
let it roar
let it soar
No need for music...
Fill me up,
with all of those
beautiful-terrible words
of love and hate,
your dirty fantasies
savage profanities
our shared unspoken
movements of madness
and ecstacy
No need for reasons...
Just fill me up--
Fill up my mind
my cunt
my empty aching womb
my mouth
my hungry restless soul
my palm
my angry yearning fingers
my heart...
All I need is you.
Written by
tidalnymph
(Kasandra)
Published 19th Nov 2010
| Edited 23rd Jan 2011
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re: wow
19th Nov 2010 5:57pm
TMI dude,hahaha! but i guess that's my original purpose of writing that poem...so thankss?
re: re: wow
19th Nov 2010 6:04pm
re: NICE
20th Nov 2010 2:38pm
Whatever.
20th Nov 2010 10:05pm
It's okay. I mean, if you're into this kind of thing, its okay. Its kind of graphic, don't you think? Where's the tease? Where's the tension? Try again and message me the final draft. I'll give you another chance.
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re: Whatever.
Darn you guys are so strict here. LOL! Ok fine-- whatever! I'll just message you if something comes up to me! :P
yes
21st Nov 2010 2:37pm
that's a lucky man who gets to fill you up. i'm glad this one was requested. love the "no need for..." lines. had a good drum beat to it. made me want to ravish you. i say keep it the way it is. keep it sexy...
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re: yes
yeah your right im following a certain beat in my head when I wrote this poem--glad you pick up on that! thanks JP! salute :)
re: Love it!
22nd Nov 2010 5:45pm
Had to come back (no pun intended)
24th Nov 2010 9:56am
The raw intensity of this work creates a division in me. The poet analyzing and evaluating the writing. The man in me wanting the object of the writing (you?), partly against my will.
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re: Had to come back (no pun intended)
That's the charm of my poems, if you really take it seriously it'll mess up your head! thanks again and sorry bout that! :)
wonderful
9th Dec 2010 3:35am
re: wonderful
9th Dec 2010 6:00am
Passionate Savage
Anonymous
15th Dec 2010 3:04am
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re: Passionate Savage
you know what i feel the same way... don't like that word either! ..and this poem is really blunt but it's really honest,
I wrote it solely to express... Thanks Sam for the nice comment :)
I wrote it solely to express... Thanks Sam for the nice comment :)
Filling you up
Anonymous
2nd Jan 2011 1:13am
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SWEETS
23rd Jan 2011 1:58am
Don't you worry about those fuckin' haters I think your stuff was the BOMB!!! I loved it
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re: SWEETS
23rd Jan 2011 2:07am
Pierre's not a 'hater', he just knows what he likes to read. Trouble is we're all different. Personally I thought it was stunning. The last two lines saved and made it the complete rendition of a beautiful, strong woman but still, don't take what Pierre said as 'hating' it's just opinion.
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re: re: SWEETS
Pierre is just trying to get some more lusty poetry out of this gem! *haha* The man knows what he's up to.
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re: re: re: SWEETS
Thank you guys!
Don't worry, Pierre is just fooling around,
he liked that poem he told me. :)
Don't worry, Pierre is just fooling around,
he liked that poem he told me. :)