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Darkness Sleeps
Single file in a row
bare feet freezing in the snow
in a pile, bodies burn
all wait fearfully for their turn
ash and smoke clog the air
ringing with screams of despair
moving closer to their end
their minds begin to slowly bend
the snow is stained with crimson red
drinking in the blood they've shed
in the trees, starved ravens wait
to feed on those who've met their fate
more bodies burn, the bells tolls on
the moon reveals a scarlet dawn
as all the corpses burn in heaps
just for now, the darkness sleeps
(December 3, 2012)
bare feet freezing in the snow
in a pile, bodies burn
all wait fearfully for their turn
ash and smoke clog the air
ringing with screams of despair
moving closer to their end
their minds begin to slowly bend
the snow is stained with crimson red
drinking in the blood they've shed
in the trees, starved ravens wait
to feed on those who've met their fate
more bodies burn, the bells tolls on
the moon reveals a scarlet dawn
as all the corpses burn in heaps
just for now, the darkness sleeps
(December 3, 2012)
Published 20th Jun 2013
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21st Jun 2013 6:37am
21st Jun 2013 6:39am
welcome to the Deep
good work!!!
ash and smoke clog the air
ringing with screams of despair
moving closer to their end
their minds begin to slowly bend !!!!
good work!!!
ash and smoke clog the air
ringing with screams of despair
moving closer to their end
their minds begin to slowly bend !!!!
Anonymous
21st Jun 2013 3:30pm
Good job, flowed well together:)
Favorite lines: Single file in a row
bare feet freezing in the snow
in a pile, bodies burn
all wait fearfully for their turn
moving closer to their end
their minds begin to slowly bend
the moon reveals a scarlet dawn
just for now, the darkness sleeps
Favorite lines: Single file in a row
bare feet freezing in the snow
in a pile, bodies burn
all wait fearfully for their turn
moving closer to their end
their minds begin to slowly bend
the moon reveals a scarlet dawn
just for now, the darkness sleeps
