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If Women only knew
Second only to nude
A woman in a sundress
Stops me dead in my tracks
If they only knew
The synchronization of the wind on a dress
Cascading their hair down to their base
Elements dancing
Silhouettes their form
Full of beauty
The addition of a floppy hat
And I am removed from this world
Taken to a Serengeti Plains
Where I am an impoverished alpha lion
I am down wind from you're scent
Every natural instinct kicks in
I crouched low
Through the high grass I see you gracing
You're my gazelle
You serve my every pleasure
I slowly take you down
Strip you of your coverings
You gladly succumb
your the perfect kill
You feed me
You feed me
You feed me
Maybe I'm your gazelle and
you're the one with all the power
Do you know you seduce me
You radiate light
You are the sun within a dress
Woman and a sundress
A woman in a sundress
Stops me dead in my tracks
If they only knew
The synchronization of the wind on a dress
Cascading their hair down to their base
Elements dancing
Silhouettes their form
Full of beauty
The addition of a floppy hat
And I am removed from this world
Taken to a Serengeti Plains
Where I am an impoverished alpha lion
I am down wind from you're scent
Every natural instinct kicks in
I crouched low
Through the high grass I see you gracing
You're my gazelle
You serve my every pleasure
I slowly take you down
Strip you of your coverings
You gladly succumb
your the perfect kill
You feed me
You feed me
You feed me
Maybe I'm your gazelle and
you're the one with all the power
Do you know you seduce me
You radiate light
You are the sun within a dress
Woman and a sundress
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17th Jun 2013 2:09am
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17th Jun 2013 12:42pm
Thank you so much for the wonderful comments.part of me feels like my secrets out.
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Anonymous
17th Jun 2013 3:46pm
made me love my sundresses even more, LOL
Much enjoyed the read, very airy but retained it's depth..nice work, Puppy
Much enjoyed the read, very airy but retained it's depth..nice work, Puppy
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re: Re: If Women only knew
17th Jun 2013 7:44pm
You could do an experiment go up and ask for something free
And they'll tell you no.Then go back with your sundress on.I bet you get it.
And they'll tell you no.Then go back with your sundress on.I bet you get it.
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20th Jun 2013 7:09pm
I like this floaty, swirling poem. Just like a sundress...
Bit funny that you think women don't know... some of us do.
:)
Bit funny that you think women don't know... some of us do.
:)
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re: Re: If Women only knew
20th Jun 2013 11:51pm
I think a small percentage of the women truly know or you would see so many more than you do.thank you
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Anonymous
23rd Jun 2013 10:40pm
oh wow, im going shopping for a sundress and a hat right now ;) Great flow of your thoughts in this piece, nicely done!
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