I take it you derive your inspiration from Pound's "In a Station of the Metro." Indeed, I think of him as I read your poems. If only his Cantos were as concise.
I think 'In a station of the metro' has affected my poetry more than any other single poem. I'm not sure I like Pound, but when he was good he was brilliant.
I agree. I find Pound a bit too pedantic, but I love his 'In a station of the metro.' His influence on you shows, and we all benefit. You are an excellent poet, my friend.