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Water
In this Lonely Heart,
We walk this world Apart.
You Lost your Truest Self and All that made You,
Even I was Lost a time or two.
The Truth Confessed the Lie is Dead,
and you are free from the Wrong in Our Head.
I am spent from Fantasy.
Unable to Lay My body down one Last time i now See,
As all comes Clear.
Till this moment Your Screams still I Hear.
Water Rushing Me away as Great Waves Push You under
and All is Black as We are Free...
We walk this world Apart.
You Lost your Truest Self and All that made You,
Even I was Lost a time or two.
The Truth Confessed the Lie is Dead,
and you are free from the Wrong in Our Head.
I am spent from Fantasy.
Unable to Lay My body down one Last time i now See,
As all comes Clear.
Till this moment Your Screams still I Hear.
Water Rushing Me away as Great Waves Push You under
and All is Black as We are Free...
Published 15th Jun 2013
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20th Jun 2013 3:54pm
20th Jun 2013 4:50pm
Thank you, i get most my inspiration from dreams and this one was very trying to put into words because the dream was about walking on the streets and bumping into a Girl that gave me a vision of her and the trouble she had as a little girl with a multiple personality, and that a hypnotist forced both into a trance that made them think they where drowning in a Black sea and the other consciousness let go so she could live. Weird right!!!
20th Jun 2013 4:53pm
20th Jun 2013 6:53pm
Psh, nah man it's cool, it's always awesome to find out where a writer's inspiration comes from
7th Aug 2013 6:55am
7th Aug 2013 9:27am
Thanks i've posted other stuff and two more just now if your interested.
