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A Love Proposal
This is my weightless love,
A big distance I have traveled for you-
Amidst the stars and at par with the planets,
Isn’t it my romantic clue?
The heaven is just a distance from us,
So that I can’t lie-
My love for you has opened its wings,
Such a long period, am I not shy?
But this is not true,
So far I know my true devotion-
I decided to propose you in the big space,
Do you understand my emotion?
[b]I am in love again these days and this is one more composition for my beloved. She is not even aware of my feelings for her and when she will hear about this I am sure she will stop talking to me. She will be angry because she has no idea and place about my feelings for her and that is why I am very afraid to propose her. She is beautiful, intelligent, and is a wonderful person. I am lucky that she considers me as her friend and respects me very much. I don’t want to loose her vicinity amidst the crowd of the world and so I decided to propose her in this poem where I have taken her to space with me. The big and vast space where amidst the glittering stars and slow moving planets she will be there only for me. We will float in the space and kiss and hug each other. Gosh she accepts my proposal! Its only a dream dear readers…[/b]
A big distance I have traveled for you-
Amidst the stars and at par with the planets,
Isn’t it my romantic clue?
The heaven is just a distance from us,
So that I can’t lie-
My love for you has opened its wings,
Such a long period, am I not shy?
But this is not true,
So far I know my true devotion-
I decided to propose you in the big space,
Do you understand my emotion?
[b]I am in love again these days and this is one more composition for my beloved. She is not even aware of my feelings for her and when she will hear about this I am sure she will stop talking to me. She will be angry because she has no idea and place about my feelings for her and that is why I am very afraid to propose her. She is beautiful, intelligent, and is a wonderful person. I am lucky that she considers me as her friend and respects me very much. I don’t want to loose her vicinity amidst the crowd of the world and so I decided to propose her in this poem where I have taken her to space with me. The big and vast space where amidst the glittering stars and slow moving planets she will be there only for me. We will float in the space and kiss and hug each other. Gosh she accepts my proposal! Its only a dream dear readers…[/b]
Published 14th Nov 2010
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14th Nov 2010 7:17am
Mystery woman, indeed. Who is it?! Haha, you've made me curious. :) The poem is beautiful and extremely heartfelt, you should be very proud of this one, Anando. I hope she likes it!
15th Nov 2010 7:51pm
i like this poem. it is the first one i read after joining the site. the imagery is beautiful. she is a lucky girl
