Molecules

I've come to admire your odd syntax. If nothing else, you're a true original, Anando. A moving and lovely poem, with some fine images, and a strong, heartfelt core.

I have tried a lot to mend such oddness Jack. But when I am there with a feeling to express I have found such an attempt of mine something intervening to my creativity. So I just go on writing like such a stupid. Your second sentence of the comment is scaring me Jack. Is this a compliment or you are making fun of me. I am original dear. Teach me something if I am wrong. Your work has influenced me a lot and I would like to be improved by you. Thanks a lot again for sparing your time and founding it worthy.

Why would I make fun of you? You're a very good friend, Anando, and I wouldn't dream of being so cruel. I say what I mean when it comes to poetry. If I ever do lie, then it's not about art. This is a good poem. That's my opinion.

I really like that bit where water is throw out the window for love...you articulate that bit so subtly.

I was crossing my fingers to let my readers identify and appreciate me on the water subject and the way I have used it in the poem. I am glad that you found that effort of mine. Thank you very much Merda.

pure/tender/sensual/almost erotic/moving etc etc etc
these are a few of the things i felt while reading it.

I am feeling as if on the top of the world!!!

I had to break through your use of syntax instead of grammar to see how beautifully you have done with this poem.

I am sorry that you nurse all those burning love within for a person you think will not appreciate it..."Amid my crafted imaginations about you-
And you will never be their mother,
But I admire your surrogacy for true. "

It is a great piece.

Divine that you have commented me for the first time and you have liked my work. The thing is that the girl I am loving is so much beautiful and superior than me that I am afraid to disclose my heart. God help me out!