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Indie Crown
I’m so alt, hipster, underground royalty
I shot myself square in the head
Since living is mainstream trash
Then they took off my indie crown
Melted it down to golden strings
And used my corpse as a puppet
Which will get old by next summer
I shot myself square in the head
Since living is mainstream trash
Then they took off my indie crown
Melted it down to golden strings
And used my corpse as a puppet
Which will get old by next summer
Published 12th Jun 2013
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19th Jun 2013 8:40pm
I really really loved this short prose but the last line leaves me unsatisfied. I'd suggest either carrying it on or keeping the poem this length and choosing a different line to end it abrubtly...does that make sense?
20th Jun 2013 11:27pm
6th Jul 2013 00:21am
cool write. rode out on a benevolent bullet, happy at last, then they rob the corpse...
