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Luke, I am your...
I sit in this cage
with rusting bars
shaped from my age.
by now crippled hands.
The key was molded from my heart,
For perhaps they knew,
it undoubtedly would lock.
for the hope of better days,
So watch me sit
as the years spin by,
and the moon adverts her eyes,
From the lonely
to the lovers.
and as the iron rots
and the golden clouds rise off my canvas
I hope that I too,
have not decayed,
with rusting bars
shaped from my age.
by now crippled hands.
The key was molded from my heart,
For perhaps they knew,
it undoubtedly would lock.
for the hope of better days,
So watch me sit
as the years spin by,
and the moon adverts her eyes,
From the lonely
to the lovers.
and as the iron rots
and the golden clouds rise off my canvas
I hope that I too,
have not decayed,
Published 11th Jun 2013
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I was chucklin' at the title then I read your comment then clicked your name and see it is you who used the star wars line for a title (I wonder if you know Skynet is from...oops, off topic) and read the piece and now I gotta compliment you on crafting
"and the moon adverts her eyes"
and also
"as the golden clouds rise off my canvas"
The last one is VERY GOOD.
Perhaps Wiki "Rainbow body" and learn a bit of how some of us move on.
golden clouds rise off my canvas
nice one
"and the moon adverts her eyes"
and also
"as the golden clouds rise off my canvas"
The last one is VERY GOOD.
Perhaps Wiki "Rainbow body" and learn a bit of how some of us move on.
golden clouds rise off my canvas
nice one
12th Jun 2013 4:57am
I'm glad you liked it! I am now completely in love with this "rainbow body" concept. Thanks for introducing me!
12th Jun 2013 5:11am
17th Jun 2013 8:06pm
Don't no what to say truly new to my eyes and hart. Like it very much can't wait to read more.
