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Part Me
Part my pinkish lips
grab my curvy hips
dive into my desire
you can light my fire
free my sweet elixir
I'll get so much slicker
let me have your shaft
I need to feel your craft
my lips part as you enter
filling my beautiful center
slowly sliding in and out
begging for me to spout
we come together in time
laying inside me feels sublime
grab my curvy hips
dive into my desire
you can light my fire
free my sweet elixir
I'll get so much slicker
let me have your shaft
I need to feel your craft
my lips part as you enter
filling my beautiful center
slowly sliding in and out
begging for me to spout
we come together in time
laying inside me feels sublime
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Re: Part Me
10th Jun 2013 1:26pm
mmmmmmmm partin' you sounds like such sweet bliss l.o.l. this was very sensual n hott... you sure do know how to get the blood pressure UP l.o.l.
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10th Jun 2013 1:49pm
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10th Jun 2013 1:35pm
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Anonymous
10th Jun 2013 3:07pm
such imagery tl...nice write!
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10th Jun 2013 3:19pm
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Anonymous
10th Jun 2013 4:57pm
tommie,
I don't know why but the first thing that came to mind was an old candy ad, the catch phrase being: How many licks does it take to get to the center... ; ) Enjoyed!!!
tornado
I don't know why but the first thing that came to mind was an old candy ad, the catch phrase being: How many licks does it take to get to the center... ; ) Enjoyed!!!
tornado
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10th Jun 2013 9:36pm
tornado,
Let's find out!!!
Thanks for reading..always a pleasure hearing from you!
Tommie
Let's find out!!!
Thanks for reading..always a pleasure hearing from you!
Tommie
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10th Jun 2013 5:02pm
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10th Jun 2013 7:31pm
Well, if you insist!
Steamy, passionate words, Tommie! I'm sure ready to part something after reading that!
Steamy, passionate words, Tommie! I'm sure ready to part something after reading that!
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Anonymous
10th Jun 2013 11:55pm
Ah this one was okay ;) I like your use of elixir and slicker. It seems like maybe just maybe you enjoy sex, true?
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11th Jun 2013 00:03am
Just okay? ;)
Am I giving that impression ...that I enjoy sex?? ;-)
Completely true!! ;))
Am I giving that impression ...that I enjoy sex?? ;-)
Completely true!! ;))
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Anonymous
11th Jun 2013 00:26am
I was kidding...just trying to practice a little self control ;) Btw the curvy hips part was a sexy line. Good to know that you like coitus as the proper English say. "cause sometimes the guys think they're alone in that passion...you know like coitus shmoitus
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Anonymous
11th Jun 2013 1:18am
Yeaaaaaah! That curvy thang had me imagining ;)
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Anonymous
11th Jun 2013 4:58am
There's a Spanish saying that goes "Que curvas y yo sin frenos"
Translated "What curves and me without brakes" ;)
Translated "What curves and me without brakes" ;)
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