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Tempted?
Are you tempted,
do you want me?
here I am,
like what you see?
Are you tempted?
come touch me
you know that you wanna
get closer baby
Are you tempted,
to take a taste?
I am waiting
no time to waste
Are you tempted?
let's have some fun
it will take all night
before we are done
Are you tempted,
do you want me?
well let's get started
time for ecstasy
Are you tempted?
I want you, now
you'll beg for more
this is my vow!
Are you tempted?
do you want me?
here I am,
like what you see?
Are you tempted?
come touch me
you know that you wanna
get closer baby
Are you tempted,
to take a taste?
I am waiting
no time to waste
Are you tempted?
let's have some fun
it will take all night
before we are done
Are you tempted,
do you want me?
well let's get started
time for ecstasy
Are you tempted?
I want you, now
you'll beg for more
this is my vow!
Are you tempted?
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9th Jun 2013 00:43am
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9th Jun 2013 6:33am
I enjoyed the repetition of the question, it adds so much to the sexual tension throughout the poem.
Straight as an arrow and even I'm tempted. Brilliant job.
Straight as an arrow and even I'm tempted. Brilliant job.
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Anonymous
9th Jun 2013 1:10pm
Lead me not into temptation, I can find it myself? A teasing pen well used.
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9th Jun 2013 5:05pm
I am sure you can find it yourself!!
thanks for reading
glad you enjoyed the tease
thanks for reading
glad you enjoyed the tease
Re: Tempted?
9th Jun 2013 2:47pm
Found this interesting, expressive and at the same time ironic, particularly so given Nick Ross's recent comments in the UK.
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