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I SAW HER TODAY...
It's funny,yet cruel,how it doesn't change.
You stay away awhile,but the feelings are always prepared to surface.
The same insects wiggle in your stomach.
The same light glows around her.
The same sadness hits you in waves,when she speaks.
You may think you're hiding it,but I'm sure she sees.
During separation,you tend to linger on the memories that caused you two to end.
Though once her scent hits you,you remember the sweetness she was.
Time never heals wounds.
It just gives you to the opportunity to create barriers around them.
It doesn't take much for those barriers to come crashing down,
and leave those wounds exposed all over again.
You stay away awhile,but the feelings are always prepared to surface.
The same insects wiggle in your stomach.
The same light glows around her.
The same sadness hits you in waves,when she speaks.
You may think you're hiding it,but I'm sure she sees.
During separation,you tend to linger on the memories that caused you two to end.
Though once her scent hits you,you remember the sweetness she was.
Time never heals wounds.
It just gives you to the opportunity to create barriers around them.
It doesn't take much for those barriers to come crashing down,
and leave those wounds exposed all over again.
Published 7th Jun 2013
| Edited 8th Jun 2013
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Jasper,
With this poem...Your painful wounds seep bittersweet truth, and sadness , upon the page.
It's amazing how something as simple as just seeing a former love , can send us hurtling backwards in time...
"Time never heals wounds./It just gives you the opportunities to create barriers around them..."--truer words were never spoken.
Nothing can ever be created to save us from our most painful memories.
Well scribed, my friend! Thank you for posting.
Sioch`ain leat,
Enchantress
With this poem...Your painful wounds seep bittersweet truth, and sadness , upon the page.
It's amazing how something as simple as just seeing a former love , can send us hurtling backwards in time...
"Time never heals wounds./It just gives you the opportunities to create barriers around them..."--truer words were never spoken.
Nothing can ever be created to save us from our most painful memories.
Well scribed, my friend! Thank you for posting.
Sioch`ain leat,
Enchantress
8th Jun 2013 1:53am
Thank you Enchantress...I cannot wait till I'm somewhere without wounds,or time;)
Anonymous
8th Jun 2013 5:12am
Ouch and well written...
Really enjoyed.
Really enjoyed.
11th Jun 2013 7:57pm
Feel your pain, too, through your words. Love is cruel and slashes wounds like the sword of an amoured knight.
Chi
Chi
10th Jul 2013 5:47am
we've all been in that position. i've yet to feel worse pain. beautifully written
