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UNITED STATES OF AMERICA
How can they say America is united?
When in truth she is divided
Into so many sides
So many lines drawn into the sand
Poor vs rich
black vs white
Democrate vs Republican
What ever happen to the American dream?
But then again America was built on division
Written by keith edward baucum
When in truth she is divided
Into so many sides
So many lines drawn into the sand
Poor vs rich
black vs white
Democrate vs Republican
What ever happen to the American dream?
But then again America was built on division
Written by keith edward baucum
Published 7th Jun 2013
| Edited 4th May 2015
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8th Jun 2013 2:21pm
I liked how you capitalized the title as if to emphasize it is just the opposite. One suggestion, "Democrate" should either be "Democrat" or "Democratic".
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8th Jun 2013 2:50pm
Thank you for your kind words
Im an independent voter i vote with
The democrates ive looked at third parties
I like some but not that many
Im an independent voter i vote with
The democrates ive looked at third parties
I like some but not that many
13th Jun 2013 00:20am
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