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Today Is
This grey
surrounds me sinking
the titanic feeling
I can feel the clawing
demons, preying
cold hands
despair the day
Can you not hear me
screaming in this cage
"Let me out, let me out"
Paints a pretty picture
this, gut wrenching fear
of a future
Not far from here
when times
are surely better
I will fly
Not today though
it's too dark
and far too cold
surrounds me sinking
the titanic feeling
I can feel the clawing
demons, preying
cold hands
despair the day
Can you not hear me
screaming in this cage
"Let me out, let me out"
Paints a pretty picture
this, gut wrenching fear
of a future
Not far from here
when times
are surely better
I will fly
Not today though
it's too dark
and far too cold
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Re: Today Is
Anonymous
6th Jun 2013 9:03am
Nice work dude..I'll fly away is what I get from it.I like the way you've put this :-)

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6th Jun 2013 9:07am
Re: Today Is
6th Jun 2013 9:31am
There is a time to fly and a time to die, a time to sigh and a time to stay: good read Carpe.
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Re: Today Is
Anonymous
6th Jun 2013 2:04pm
can relate...that was me yesterday noctem...
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6th Jun 2013 2:39pm
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7th Jun 2013 4:46pm
Re: Today Is
7th Jun 2013 6:47am
Yes, I can relate to these kind of dark days very well~ So I always look forwards to tomorrow or the day after in hopes it will be a whole lot brighter and certainly a whole lot better. Very well penned, you grasped these of emotions very well~ Cheers for the read :)~
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7th Jun 2013 4:55pm