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ORAL REVELATION (PUN FUN)
"NOW I know why they call you 'Man-eater'", he said,
When she looked up at him after giving him head.
When she looked up at him after giving him head.
Published 4th Jun 2013
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4th Jun 2013 11:39pm
oh here she comes
watch out boys she'll chew you up
oh here she comes
she's a...
watch out boys she'll chew you up
oh here she comes
she's a...
5th Jun 2013 6:34am
Anonymous
4th Jun 2013 11:56pm
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5th Jun 2013 6:37am
The style was influenced by childhood reading of a (child friendly) book of verse by Ogden Nash called "Pun Fun", particularly this:
"I'm not as strong as I used to be",
Said the boiled onion to the pea.
That kind of rhythm.
"I'm not as strong as I used to be",
Said the boiled onion to the pea.
That kind of rhythm.
Anonymous
5th Jun 2013 4:14am
Yep....
5th Jun 2013 6:57am
