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NOT KNOWING
Sliding by to see friends I haven't chilled with in a while, too play cards and dominoes, I knocked on the wrong apartment door. Not knowing. As the door opened, there stood sexy you. BEAUTIFUL. Wearing a black, tight, short and wet-looking dress with hot pumps on with nipples greeting me as she says "Hello handsome" in an angelic voice. Looking delicious, Breasts and bubble stood out in bold relief. By the quick stiffness I thought," I would love too use my face for her pleasure", being so gorgeous too me. Noticing my attraction you sweetly invite me in. I follow as ass wiggles away, still not knowing. After some conversation and a drink or three, I knew but she didn't. Then our eyes lock with lust. Liquid motions of your hot body melt me, as we kiss like our lips knew each other. I felt your ecstasy with your trembling body against mine. Deliciously slow our clothes pealed away. Beautiful breasts and nipples receive the tongue lashing of a lifetime, as you grow moist moaning. I slither down between legs and put the back of soft thighs on my shoulders. I run tongue deep into you first too feel your insides quiver. Then concentrate licking the sweet lips of your vertical smile. I savor your flavor and intoxicating smell. Raising your head like Ooooh shit, you watch me eat you. With hot hips grinding face hard, you cum back to back moaning loud, vice gripping my head with pretty thighs. Hot four letter words flowed from your panting mouth. Still my turn, sexy you flip over, face down, gorgeous ass up. As I mount, knees between legs, I ease sugar cane into your wet, dripping temple. Long slow strokes and dirty talk made you cum twice more in an hours time, before I exploded. As we lay, you say that you're happy we hit it off so well for your first blind date. I told her that I didn't have a blind date today, I came looking for some friends and tapped on the wrong door. But I adored the time spent. So we remained friends and as we dressed, we heard knocks on the door. She, now knowing..
Sir Lancelott
Sir Lancelott
Written by
Sir_Lancelott
(Lance)
Published 1st Jun 2013
| Edited 4th Jun 2013
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Re: NOT KNOWING
Anonymous
1st Jun 2013 8:30pm
Love it. Wasn't just the wrong door you ended up tapping...
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4th Jun 2013 2:34pm
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1st Jun 2013 9:35pm
"I ease sugar cane into your wet, dripping temple "
love it!!!!so damn hot!!
love it!!!!so damn hot!!
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4th Jun 2013 2:36pm
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1st Jun 2013 10:43pm
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4th Jun 2013 2:38pm
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2nd Jun 2013 1:57am
Then our eyes lock with lust. Liquid motions of your hot body melt me, as we kiss like our lips knew each other. I felt your ecstasy
Greatness Lance!!!
an excellent write!!!
Glad to see You back, Looks like You found the right door!!!
Greatness Lance!!!
an excellent write!!!
Glad to see You back, Looks like You found the right door!!!
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4th Jun 2013 2:40pm
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2nd Jun 2013 4:01am
I really don't think that you knocked at the wrong door my dear sweet and sexy knight!
Sexy and sweet as always! Sexy words that makes one cross there legs, bite there lips and ease back and enjoy your ink.
XoXoXoXo
Sexy and sweet as always! Sexy words that makes one cross there legs, bite there lips and ease back and enjoy your ink.
XoXoXoXo
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4th Jun 2013 2:44pm
That's very sweet of you sweets!!
It's sexy to see a woman bite her lip!!
Glad you enjoyed!
It's sexy to see a woman bite her lip!!
Glad you enjoyed!
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2nd Jun 2013 6:43am
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4th Jun 2013 2:45pm
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3rd Jun 2013 6:53am
My friend the attraction is so nicely depicted here. Time to break out the fan!
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4th Jun 2013 2:53pm
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5th Jun 2013 5:35pm
"So we remained friends and as we dressed, we heard knocks on the door. She, now knowing.. " hmmm sounds like a teaser to another event/pem/rendition!! :) hmmmm
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27th Oct 2013 8:23pm
Impressed by your
words so carefully chosen,
especially
love the "vertical smile"!
words so carefully chosen,
especially
love the "vertical smile"!
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27th Oct 2013 9:04pm
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4th Nov 2013 3:59am
I'd be pissed that the actual blind date was obviously WAY late....or she was ready way early. And she already knew you weren't the blind date because you told her right before hearing the knock on the door from the loser that was late for his date. And...do people really have sex with someone they just met? I can't seem to resonate with that...from my perspective it lacks passion and authenticity...but you do define it as lust, which I totally agree with. You obviously have writing skills which I admire. I'm not at all trying to be critical...it just tend to pick things apart and really think about the words, the story, the motivation and emotions of the writer and find where I can resonate or connect with a writing...I find sex without deep emotional connection to be pointless. But for some i imagine that physical gratification is more important than emotional security or fulfillment and I like to read work that differs greatly from my own because I always respect different views and perspectives. Your descriptive writing abilities are strong...very straight forward with very clear analogies when used. Even if I don't resonate with the material, I can spot a good writer when I see one! Good job!
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4th Nov 2013 3:33pm
I couldn't have put it any better. You've said a mouth full sweets. I like the comment even if you don't resonate with the piece and Thanxx too sweet you for the kind words.
I appreciate you
I appreciate you