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Tears of the soul
Tears that fall from your cheeks
Do not mean much
They are devoid of life
Like droplets of bleach
They may cover your face
Soaking you in a watery haste
Little do they know...
It is all a waste
Real pain ensues
When the heart shatters
Leaving your soul with a smothering bruise
Memories of happiness are left scattered
You think to yourself...it is of no use
Feeling so battered
You cannot find your glue
Glue that held you together at your most fractured
Do not mean much
They are devoid of life
Like droplets of bleach
They may cover your face
Soaking you in a watery haste
Little do they know...
It is all a waste
Real pain ensues
When the heart shatters
Leaving your soul with a smothering bruise
Memories of happiness are left scattered
You think to yourself...it is of no use
Feeling so battered
You cannot find your glue
Glue that held you together at your most fractured
Published 1st Jun 2013
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2nd Jun 2013 00:57am
Poignant; well-written. Enjoyed the construction, the interrelated half-rhymes of the 3rd and 4th stanzas and, overall, the emotional/visual clarity of this piece.
Icepoet
Icepoet
Anonymous
2nd Jun 2013 4:10pm
Second'ing what Icepoet said (because, I could have never said it so well). Loved this one, and the poster image that accompanies it.
2nd Jun 2013 5:56pm
Thank you both. I know so little about poetry that I know must go Google what "Stanzas" means. Lol. I am appreciative of any feedback. I especially enjoy being acknowledged.
3rd Jun 2013 6:03pm
