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Sisters
I walked with you
inseparable at times
annoyed by this shadow
that followed your every move
Clinging to your cuff
not wanting to miss a thing
I was afraid you would have all
the fun and adventure without me
Then she came along
holding onto my waist with
little dirty hands and tears in her
eyes she wanted to be a shadow too
Together we three
walked with the sun on our
backs showing our silhouettes hand
on cuff hand to waist oldest to youngest
inseparable at times
annoyed by this shadow
that followed your every move
Clinging to your cuff
not wanting to miss a thing
I was afraid you would have all
the fun and adventure without me
Then she came along
holding onto my waist with
little dirty hands and tears in her
eyes she wanted to be a shadow too
Together we three
walked with the sun on our
backs showing our silhouettes hand
on cuff hand to waist oldest to youngest
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Re: Sisters
Anonymous
29th May 2013 2:36pm
sweet write tl...strider!

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29th May 2013 6:20pm
wow tommie
I saw both my sisters and I
at the beach (and my baby bro was there 2lol)
loved this
loved!!
I saw both my sisters and I
at the beach (and my baby bro was there 2lol)
loved this
loved!!
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re: Re: Sisters
29th May 2013 6:42pm
How amazing..I have a baby bro too!Him and I are the
middle kids!!
Thank you D ;)
middle kids!!
Thank you D ;)
Re: Sisters
29th May 2013 6:25pm
tommie
I shared this one on my facebook page
and tagged my sister so they could read
it too!!
again...beautiful words
I shared this one on my facebook page
and tagged my sister so they could read
it too!!
again...beautiful words
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re: Re: Sisters
29th May 2013 6:43pm
That's very sweet of you...great idea, I think I will too!
thank you very much! :)
thank you very much! :)
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29th May 2013 11:04pm
Sweet. I have two sisters but can visualise the transition from being the youngster tagging on to the elder to being the one is tagged on to by a younger. (I was first born.)
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29th May 2013 11:32pm
Great work, Sugar! Makes me wish I had a Sis instead of two older Bros..
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Anonymous
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30th May 2013 1:23am
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