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Re: My Urban Blues( the final take)
28th May 2013 5:24pm
Throws a bucket of water on the rocks over Gypsy :P LOL.
Very nice and steamy dear. Lovely.
Very nice and steamy dear. Lovely.
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re: Re: My Urban Blues( the final take)
28th May 2013 5:37pm
Re: My Urban Blues( the final take)
28th May 2013 5:25pm
Two snaps and a twirl, girl! Bravo!
You did the damn thing! :)
What a sultry sexy ending to your steamy beautiful sensual 'threesome'! ;) I was waiting on the final take and you didn't disappoint! Smooches! Xo
You did the damn thing! :)
What a sultry sexy ending to your steamy beautiful sensual 'threesome'! ;) I was waiting on the final take and you didn't disappoint! Smooches! Xo
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re: Re: My Urban Blues( the final take)
28th May 2013 5:41pm
Thank you Rain!!! I am thrilled you liked so much, thank you, thank you!!
xoxoxo
Red
xoxoxo
Red
Re: My Urban Blues( the final take)
Anonymous
28th May 2013 5:30pm
wow red...nicely done strider:)
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re: Re: My Urban Blues( the final take)
28th May 2013 5:43pm
Re: My Urban Blues( the final take)
28th May 2013 6:42pm
Mmmmmm the ending was more delicious than the beginning, but hey that's becuz, it's how it's supposed to be
More yummier as you get to the end ! lol
Beautifully composed mini series lady!!
More yummier as you get to the end ! lol
Beautifully composed mini series lady!!
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re: Re: My Urban Blues( the final take)
28th May 2013 7:22pm
Re: My Urban Blues( the final take)
28th May 2013 11:24pm
My O My Skirt, do You know how to put flirt into word!!! :) What a Steamin' Show, You rocked the house indeed Dear Red, Finale Fantastic!!!
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re: Re: My Urban Blues( the final take)
28th May 2013 11:34pm
Baby did I blow your skirt up?! Rotflmao hahah too much fun hahaha so happy you liked it soul!big huggs
Red
Red
re: re: Re: My Urban Blues( the final take)
28th May 2013 11:42pm
Damnit...they told me I bought a kilt:( shoulda known--Yes indeed:)Right back atchya Dear Red!!!
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re: re: re: Re: My Urban Blues( the final take)
29th May 2013 00:08am
I got a visual too funny! So you know what I must ask? What do the fellas wear under their kilts? Inquiring minds want to know...hahahahahah;p
Red
Red
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29th May 2013 5:31am
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29th May 2013 2:51pm
Going commando, I love it hahah give the girls something to see hahaha.
Red
Red
Re: My Urban Blues( the final take)
30th May 2013 4:42pm
re: Re: My Urban Blues( the final take)
30th May 2013 5:49pm
Why Thank you Mr.Moretti, there two other parts, if you liked this one you might enjoy those. I appreciate you stopping by to read my work, its always nice to see new people. I am happy you enjoyed this piece.
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