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27th May 2013 8:41pm
Nice. Like the form. Whish I had someone to sing to me as so. Lolo. Nicely written indeed.
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Anonymous
27th May 2013 9:49pm
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27th May 2013 9:53pm
Lol yeah Gabriel some funk in the hips lol thank you for reading this piece.
Red
Red
27th May 2013 9:53pm
Indeed the Sexy Songstress has the crowd entranced again!!!
Excellent Tunes You Coo Dear Red!!!
Excellent Tunes You Coo Dear Red!!!
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27th May 2013 10:16pm
You took my there, Red! I mean, you REALLY took me there! Caught up in your sexy blues!
I LOVE your Pen! Xo
I LOVE your Pen! Xo
27th May 2013 10:24pm
Thank you so much for always being so encouraging my lovely Ms.Rain I do appreciate it.Thanks for stopping by take 3 the finale is coming soon!
Red
Red
27th May 2013 10:35pm
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Anonymous
27th May 2013 10:25pm
another gem red....nice
strider
strider
27th May 2013 10:28pm
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Anonymous
28th May 2013 1:38am
This is a fun, sensual piece...you can totally picture the exchange
28th May 2013 2:41am
Lol glad you liked it, the last part is coming up hope you enjoy it too! Thank you for stopping by.
Red
Red
28th May 2013 10:37am
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