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My Opened Window
The window was left open
so you could enter my
room
Come in, be with me
in my safe place so I
can shelter you
as you
secure me
Hold my passion
feel all my
affection seep
into you
around
you
I
can feel you
flow through
me
disappearing in
my walls
as the breeze
from the open
window
dances with us
The wisps of air
mix well with
our song
making soft
music
only for
us
so you could enter my
room
Come in, be with me
in my safe place so I
can shelter you
as you
secure me
Hold my passion
feel all my
affection seep
into you
around
you
I
can feel you
flow through
me
disappearing in
my walls
as the breeze
from the open
window
dances with us
The wisps of air
mix well with
our song
making soft
music
only for
us
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Re: My Opened Window
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27th May 2013 00:11am
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Anonymous
27th May 2013 3:47am
the secret entrance tl
smooth write
strider
smooth write
strider
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Re: My Opened Window
27th May 2013 4:24pm
Aaaawww the sweetness of the thought, the steaminess of the invite... I'll be there in a few! lol
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