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I Call Her.....
I Call Her….
Slave
My iron clad beauty.
Kneeling with the poise and grace
Of a gazelle sauntering through the grasslands
I Call Her….
Whore
Wet…Wanton….Waiting
A never ending volcanic eruption
Hot molten lava oozing down creamy thighs
I Call Her….
Pain Slut
Bruised....Broken....Battered
She writhes, her body burns white hot
While my whip licks electric blue sparks from her flesh
Spent....
Depleted of all she is, Shrouded in my darkness,
I tenderly lift her up, bathing her in all that I am, all that she has made me
I Call Her ......Mine!
Slave
My iron clad beauty.
Kneeling with the poise and grace
Of a gazelle sauntering through the grasslands
I Call Her….
Whore
Wet…Wanton….Waiting
A never ending volcanic eruption
Hot molten lava oozing down creamy thighs
I Call Her….
Pain Slut
Bruised....Broken....Battered
She writhes, her body burns white hot
While my whip licks electric blue sparks from her flesh
Spent....
Depleted of all she is, Shrouded in my darkness,
I tenderly lift her up, bathing her in all that I am, all that she has made me
I Call Her ......Mine!
Published 26th May 2013
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26th May 2013 3:50pm
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One of the best erotic poems, written by a male poet, Ive read on DU. The heat clings to my skin like the sun in it's birth to shine.
Beautiful and sexy piece! Call Her what you want..........claim her yours! Well done!Xo
Welcome to DUP!:)
Poetic Love~
Beautiful and sexy piece! Call Her what you want..........claim her yours! Well done!Xo
Welcome to DUP!:)
Poetic Love~
26th May 2013 9:19pm
Lily Mae: I am so glad that you enjoyed the read....I have read many of your poems, and consider myself a big fan
Thank you for reading -SS
Thank you for reading -SS
26th May 2013 9:22pm
Rain: "The heat clings to my skin like the sun in it's birth to shine. "
Good God....that took my breath away,! Your words humble me.....Thank you!
SS
Good God....that took my breath away,! Your words humble me.....Thank you!
SS
26th May 2013 10:06pm
oh my...''Mine''one of the most desired words for a submissive to hear ...
I really love this piece..
I really love this piece..
26th May 2013 11:07pm
Geminisb: I am so glad that you can relate to the power, the word " mine" wields ....especially to a submissive .
Thank you for reading -SS
Thank you for reading -SS
27th May 2013 6:06pm
Welcome to DUP! What a great write from beginning to end. Gracefully walking thru each emotion. Brilliantly done. :)
27th May 2013 10:22pm
Enticing extremes my fav lives "Depleted of all she is, Shrouded in my darkness,
I tenderly lift her up, bathing her in all that I am, all that she has made me
I Call Her ......Mine!"
An interesting piece!
Red
I tenderly lift her up, bathing her in all that I am, all that she has made me
I Call Her ......Mine!"
An interesting piece!
Red
28th May 2013 2:38am
Gypsy Red: Thank you for taking the time to comment...so glad you enjoyed the read -SS
28th May 2013 2:36am
floweregirl: thank you for both, your kind words, as well as your welcome to DU
SS
SS
28th Jan 2014 6:42pm
i think u win the cake
cummy cummy cummy
ok yummy
as u were born
with the
biggy biggyxbiggy
not many men r endowed
they way u r
see any
certainly not me
cummy cummy cummy
ok yummy
as u were born
with the
biggy biggyxbiggy
not many men r endowed
they way u r
see any
certainly not me
1st Nov 2022 2:33am
Love rereading this after all the years ... and seeing your word "mine" ... that's how you told me I was yours... forever. After a particularly heavy whipping scene where you marked my soul as you did my flesh ... so surprised to find it marked your soul, too.
And forever it will be, my Sinful One. How we lived, loved, lasted and laughed through life. 6 years ... so much more than a bdsm couple, but a love story, real life, real time. And these are real tears I can't stop, and a really broken heart. You were larger than life, Daddy, and we both thought you'd live, we'd love ... forever.
Who could've known? 😪 💔
Wait for me, my love ... I'll meet you soon. And you can clutch your kitten, your broken lily to your chest once more.
And forever it will be, my Sinful One. How we lived, loved, lasted and laughed through life. 6 years ... so much more than a bdsm couple, but a love story, real life, real time. And these are real tears I can't stop, and a really broken heart. You were larger than life, Daddy, and we both thought you'd live, we'd love ... forever.
Who could've known? 😪 💔
Wait for me, my love ... I'll meet you soon. And you can clutch your kitten, your broken lily to your chest once more.
