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She adores him...
Everything she does is with tenderness
for it is en-grained in her soul
They are totally engrossed in each other
They are equal halves that make one whole
She tenderly removes his clothes
and folds them neatly on the chair
She kisses his head
and strokes his hair
He smiles at her
and basks in her submission
for this act of devotion
needs no permission
Everything she does is with tenderness
for it is en-grained in her soul
They are totally engrossed in each other
They are equal halves that make one whole
She tenderly removes his clothes
and folds them neatly on the chair
She kisses his head
and strokes his hair
He smiles at her
and basks in her submission
for this act of devotion
needs no permission
Published 25th May 2013
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25th May 2013 5:36pm
Anonymous
- Edited 25th May 2013 8:41pm
25th May 2013 5:55pm
I like the comfortable scene you've created. Nice one!
25th May 2013 7:27pm
Thank you..I think it might be better without the pic...sometimes the readers interpretation is better :)
Anonymous
25th May 2013 8:43pm
The pic's okay...maybe not tender enough...whatever, the words are what matter to me.
26th May 2013 4:42pm
Anonymous
27th May 2013 6:28am
Quite simple beautiful
27th May 2013 6:38am
