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You Broke Me
You, the one that told me that you'll never leave my side,
have disappeared...
You, the one that said that you'll never hurt me,
have ripe my heart right out of my chest.
The blood curdling scream of my broken soul,
always gets stronger when i lay my eyes and you both..
You broke me....
You, the one that said, you were my friend,
have taken away the purpose of my living...
You, the one who knew i loved him more than i knew,
have taken him away, from me...
How dare you call yourself a friend....
You broke me...
Oh! How i would be please to take out your eyes,
and eat them, so that you can see, the inside of me....
Knowing that you destroyed, and killed me.
The process of decay is still in progress.
And getting your blood all over me will be adding more of a stress.
So i wont,
how would you look at yourself in the mirror...
And see,
knowing that u killed...
knowing that u BOTH....
Broke Me
have disappeared...
You, the one that said that you'll never hurt me,
have ripe my heart right out of my chest.
The blood curdling scream of my broken soul,
always gets stronger when i lay my eyes and you both..
You broke me....
You, the one that said, you were my friend,
have taken away the purpose of my living...
You, the one who knew i loved him more than i knew,
have taken him away, from me...
How dare you call yourself a friend....
You broke me...
Oh! How i would be please to take out your eyes,
and eat them, so that you can see, the inside of me....
Knowing that you destroyed, and killed me.
The process of decay is still in progress.
And getting your blood all over me will be adding more of a stress.
So i wont,
how would you look at yourself in the mirror...
And see,
knowing that u killed...
knowing that u BOTH....
Broke Me
Published 25th May 2013
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3rd Nov 2013 7:03am
Man alive chica, Dig this one very much, In the mighty words o Jim Morrison, You broke on through to the other side, an made it look right on my friend, hehehe... The hook line "You broke me" it made it more real and personal, that's what made it feel and made it jump to me... Right on my friend, right on: Eddie / wolf
3rd Nov 2013 7:14am
Thank You soo much Wolf!!
This poem was very personal to me, now it's just a memory now faded.
I'm glad you liked this one... totally forgot I posted this one up.
This poem was very personal to me, now it's just a memory now faded.
I'm glad you liked this one... totally forgot I posted this one up.
24th Mar 2015 1:26am
I know what it's like to have someone you love taken from you it's happened to me several times before
25th Feb 2024 4:28pm
The repetition in between the stanzas really drive the point deep. Excellent work.
