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'Magic'
Hocus, Pocus...
it's slight of the mind...
Abracadabra, can't see it,
it's too fine
Words, those that spring forth...
just left were mine, came to rest
in this particular space in time...
Hocus, Pocus
the thoughts are in focus
Yet, randomly scattered...
say, can you 'scope' this?
Abracadabra I attack the verse
like a swarm of locusts
Overwhelmed you've become
because, denying the urge
to spit this is hopeless...
It's the magic...
of the word
Instead of straight,
made it curve
as it turned to verb...
revealing the magic
of the rhyme,
is that, Hocus Pocus...
resides within the mind...
it's slight of the mind...
Abracadabra, can't see it,
it's too fine
Words, those that spring forth...
just left were mine, came to rest
in this particular space in time...
Hocus, Pocus
the thoughts are in focus
Yet, randomly scattered...
say, can you 'scope' this?
Abracadabra I attack the verse
like a swarm of locusts
Overwhelmed you've become
because, denying the urge
to spit this is hopeless...
It's the magic...
of the word
Instead of straight,
made it curve
as it turned to verb...
revealing the magic
of the rhyme,
is that, Hocus Pocus...
resides within the mind...
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Re: 'Magic'
24th May 2013 11:27am
Re: 'Magic'
24th May 2013 12:16pm
Thank you, n I'm sure from ALL the power urs wields
That u appreciate those words :) grateful as always for ur support :)
That u appreciate those words :) grateful as always for ur support :)
Re: 'Magic'
24th May 2013 1:10pm
Love the third stanza...and you are right on, you have all the power with words, you are the writer
as always, a great write :)
as always, a great write :)
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24th May 2013 1:36pm
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24th May 2013 2:57pm
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24th May 2013 3:09pm
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Anonymous
24th May 2013 6:39pm
The magic resides in the mind. I like this, Poetikmind. Very well done! enjoyed! :)
Carlene
Carlene
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25th May 2013 8:50am
Re: 'Magic'
24th May 2013 9:33pm
Magic has the influence of having supernatural powers. hmmm...Oh so that's why im in love with your ink, huh? You put a spell on me?!
Hocus Pocus, she's a fan for life!:)
Hocus Pocus, she's a fan for life!:)
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25th May 2013 9:30am
Aaaaawwweeeelllll I'm urs too sweetness!
n yea I'm magical like that lol jk... Appreciate ya! :)
n yea I'm magical like that lol jk... Appreciate ya! :)
Re: 'Magic'
Anonymous
11th Jul 2013 4:23am
Magic I see in the words of your poem. Making me feel one thing but think another. Like this! :)
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re: Re: 'Magic'
11th Jul 2013 4:28am
Hi there how wonderful ur comment! Thank u so very much I truly appreciate ur time n comment on my ink :)
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11th Apr 2014 5:52pm
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