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Bad But No Evil
The midnight rambler is well equipped
for all seasons of the wind
can persevere with all the changes
and the most dire of unfortunate trends
For when basic creature habits are howling
satiate the reservoir of lust
kinetic energy rising up
when over flowing it will bust
The sky could be crashing
earth coming to an end
still constant like the North star
is that message my body sends
For even if I deny it
look away and ignore my state
you are near and feel it growing
doesn't seen to want to wait
So subtle in your movements
seems like no other has a clue
just that look in your eyes
like you know what I want to do
So don't torment a weakened soldier
who can't resist your unlimited charms
just know that even at my least heroic moment
I could never do you any harm
for all seasons of the wind
can persevere with all the changes
and the most dire of unfortunate trends
For when basic creature habits are howling
satiate the reservoir of lust
kinetic energy rising up
when over flowing it will bust
The sky could be crashing
earth coming to an end
still constant like the North star
is that message my body sends
For even if I deny it
look away and ignore my state
you are near and feel it growing
doesn't seen to want to wait
So subtle in your movements
seems like no other has a clue
just that look in your eyes
like you know what I want to do
So don't torment a weakened soldier
who can't resist your unlimited charms
just know that even at my least heroic moment
I could never do you any harm
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Re: Bad But No Evil
My favorite--> " For when basic creature habits are howling
satiate the reservoir of lust
kinetic energy rising up
when over flowing it will bust"
Jazz, you're so bad until your good!Xo
satiate the reservoir of lust
kinetic energy rising up
when over flowing it will bust"
Jazz, you're so bad until your good!Xo
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re: Re: Bad But No Evil
umm thanks I guess! :) I think Huey Lewis and the News said, "Sometimes Bad Is Bad".
Re: Bad But No Evil
21st May 2013 6:00am
"......So subtle in your movements
seems like no other has a clue
just that look in your eyes
like you know what I want to do ....."
They do my brother, oh they really do ;-)
seems like no other has a clue
just that look in your eyes
like you know what I want to do ....."
They do my brother, oh they really do ;-)
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re: Re: Bad But No Evil
21st May 2013 6:25am
Seems like that is another sense that us men don't perfect, at least not to the same degree.
Re: Bad But No Evil
Anonymous
21st May 2013 6:18am
Have to agree with MrM. That stanza says it all. Not even bad, just a little bit wicked... =)
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re: Re: Bad But No Evil
21st May 2013 6:27am
Funny thing was I had to go back and read that....I had forgotten already that I had penned that! Thank you for giving my words a read.
Re: Bad But No Evil
Anonymous
21st May 2013 3:05pm
Can relate big time jazz...well done sir!
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re: Re: Bad But No Evil
22nd May 2013 4:33am
Thanks, I was always certain that a reference to a Rolling Stones' song would show up soemwhere...
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21st May 2013 3:16pm
re: Re: Bad But No Evil
22nd May 2013 4:35am
Thanks, always honored to have a positive review from a member of the Round Table, even if you do add a "t"!
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22nd May 2013 7:10pm
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22nd May 2013 10:48pm
Re: Bad But No Evil
23rd May 2013 8:01pm
Charmed by your charming poem about the charms you can't resist..... ;)
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re: Re: Bad But No Evil
23rd May 2013 9:02pm
Oh noooo....I forgot a line about a snake charmer! (laugh) Thanks for the read!
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26th May 2013 6:41pm