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Dracula cuts himself./
Dracula cuts himself.
He has tried to be something he truly isn't anymore.
So he goes to a bathroom counter and bleeds down the drain.
This is difficult as his wounds keep healing.
It gets easier.
He has tried to be something he truly isn't anymore.
So he goes to a bathroom counter and bleeds down the drain.
This is difficult as his wounds keep healing.
It gets easier.
Published 30th Oct 2010
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31st Oct 2010 2:45pm
This poem was totally awesome.I completly get the idea of being someone you're not. Its simply, great.
1st Nov 2010 6:01am
Ah, a kindred spirit...thank you. I really didn't know how this would be received.
20th Oct 2012 10:02pm
last part is broken n incomplete! still a intersting perspective...save the punctuation! very tackie;( keep grindin
9th Dec 2012 4:17am
Ok, I haven't been here in quite some time, and may or may not be here too much in the future, and you commented on this piece a while ago, and I wrote it a long while ago, and in the grand scheme of things it doesn't really kill me, but I am mildly curious, what did you mean when you said it was incomplete and there was missing punctuation? When I said "It gets easier." I meant the cutting gets easier, as Dracula starts to lose his powers of healing after much cutting. I don't see how it was incomplete and I don't see how it could have used more punctuation.
13th Dec 2012 5:49am
Nor did I see it as "incomplete," though the "drive to the finish" might strike as being a tad murky...
But that we all "heal" differently may have been an interesting concept to muddle into this. Still, very nicely done with this write.
Uley
But that we all "heal" differently may have been an interesting concept to muddle into this. Still, very nicely done with this write.
Uley
