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Gossip
the tattle of her tongue
rattled so quickly
with raised pitch, arms flailing
I looked into eyes
and thought, insanity!
your depth of knowledge
of where and how
were you a fly on the wall?
then all I could think
as you spat out spam
was you quack like a duck
and I give a damn
rattled so quickly
with raised pitch, arms flailing
I looked into eyes
and thought, insanity!
your depth of knowledge
of where and how
were you a fly on the wall?
then all I could think
as you spat out spam
was you quack like a duck
and I give a damn
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Re: Gossip
Anonymous
20th May 2013 12:31pm
hmmm..very interesting write! all that said yet you DO give a damn..makes the story have more depth and more to imagine...nice work :-)

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Re: Gossip
20th May 2013 1:49pm
Well you know what I say about gossipy people?
"Loose lips get broke hips, compliments of a bat's
swing from the chicken wing!" lmao yea, I'm just saying lol
Excellent, short, mini rant :)
"Loose lips get broke hips, compliments of a bat's
swing from the chicken wing!" lmao yea, I'm just saying lol
Excellent, short, mini rant :)
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Re: Gossip
20th May 2013 3:47pm
Anonymous
- Edited 1st May 2021 7:46am
20th May 2013 4:11pm
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Re: Gossip
20th May 2013 5:06pm
Re: Gossip
20th May 2013 11:11pm
Crazy bc as much as we pretend not to care we all do give a damn when it comes to gossip. Sweet write.
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Anonymous
- Edited 6th Mar 2019 10:45pm
21st May 2013 2:51am
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