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Waiting...
I wait
that’s what one does
for something you want
but cannot have
I wait for calls
I wait for notes
I wait so patient
tick tock…tick tock…
I wait for time…
that’s what one does
for something you want
but cannot have
I wait for calls
I wait for notes
I wait so patient
tick tock…tick tock…
I wait for time…
Published 20th May 2013
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20th May 2013 1:09am
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20th May 2013 11:45am
Anonymous
20th May 2013 1:11am
I know this feeling. We used to text each other:
Him: Tick
Me: Tock...
Him: Tick
Me: Tock...
20th May 2013 11:45am
20th May 2013 4:58am
20th May 2013 11:46am
20th May 2013 7:49am
20th May 2013 11:46am
20th May 2013 3:22pm
Completely relateable poem,
sometimes I feel as if there is a clock
inside of me, with clock hands attached
to my supply of patience; slowly winding
it tighter, tenser.
Very well written: effective.
sometimes I feel as if there is a clock
inside of me, with clock hands attached
to my supply of patience; slowly winding
it tighter, tenser.
Very well written: effective.
20th May 2013 3:57pm
Anonymous
- Edited 1st May 2021 7:46am
20th May 2013 3:59pm
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