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Those Eyes
Glossy pupils, those gloomy jewels
I rise like tide to the pull of those moons
Lidless blinking, sinking into the whirpools
Fiery lashes broil my heart tender
Which pumps fuel for the flame its agenda
Flashbang blinding a daze in the splendor
Bulging bulbs bright, i want to lick
I shouts your name, burnt tongue is bit
With joy they command, binded i stick
I rise like tide to the pull of those moons
Lidless blinking, sinking into the whirpools
Fiery lashes broil my heart tender
Which pumps fuel for the flame its agenda
Flashbang blinding a daze in the splendor
Bulging bulbs bright, i want to lick
I shouts your name, burnt tongue is bit
With joy they command, binded i stick
Published 20th May 2013
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20th May 2013 4:23pm
The rhyme scheme worked effortlessly,
Glossy pupils, those gloomy jewels
I rise like tide to the pull of those moons
Lidless blinking, sinking into the whirlpools
^^Loved this stanza, incredible imagery.
you really set an atmosphere here,
drawing the reader in.
Glossy pupils, those gloomy jewels
I rise like tide to the pull of those moons
Lidless blinking, sinking into the whirlpools
^^Loved this stanza, incredible imagery.
you really set an atmosphere here,
drawing the reader in.
20th May 2013 5:54pm
