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James bond
James bond
James bond couldn't
Pay his bond
So he went to jail
He broke out of jail
The police failed
Again again and again
He shot the guy
And he died and
He fried in the sun
He fighted for his life
With a sharp knife
And saved a life
James bond couldn't
Pay his bond
So he went to jail
He broke out of jail
The police failed
Again again and again
He shot the guy
And he died and
He fried in the sun
He fighted for his life
With a sharp knife
And saved a life
Published 19th May 2013
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30th Jun 2013 8:33pm
Good poem. However it is not correct to say "he fighted for his life" ... the correct was is to say "he fought for his life"
Keep it up.
Keep it up.
