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The remains.
what remains hollowed words once the source of life,
broken into what was orignally viewed
deceiving the heart that once belonged to her.
shattered hatred filled it, a lie chaining my soul to satisfy the weakness to forbid my own words.
i possessed my own hear with an illusion to keep the source alive.
broken into what was orignally viewed
deceiving the heart that once belonged to her.
shattered hatred filled it, a lie chaining my soul to satisfy the weakness to forbid my own words.
i possessed my own hear with an illusion to keep the source alive.
Published 18th May 2013
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18th May 2013 7:51pm
good catch. but there is always more room to seacher your feelings and to go even deeper. write more on the first par. before the ending. every human emotion is tied together. embrace the hatred. and give birth to more deeper words. then i would say you got you to publish in reader maganize. i do like it.
