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kinda bitter haiku
You shine in that Benz
Now act like all your friends do
And drive off a bridge
Now act like all your friends do
And drive off a bridge
Published 17th May 2013
| Edited 27th May 2013
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24th Jan 2015 9:02pm
LMAO! Can't say I get it entirely (second line)
, but definitely funny. Uber like+++. =D
, but definitely funny. Uber like+++. =D
26th Jan 2015 2:13am
i guess i was going for a "if everyone jumped off a bridge" thing with that second line. thank you for the positive feedback!
