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Kyles poem
Kaboom Popped the balloon
The cow went moo
Because he needed a poo
Capow went the cow
The door flew open
As the floor wittened
As the clouds darkened
The lightening flattened me
So my hair was blackened
The cow went moo
Because he needed a poo
Capow went the cow
The door flew open
As the floor wittened
As the clouds darkened
The lightening flattened me
So my hair was blackened
Published 17th May 2013
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19th May 2013 3:50pm
Hey there Kmaster, I like your easy going, free-form style... it's original & different...refreshing. Sometimes even poetry can get a bit too up-tight, uppity, monotonous & boring, but your poems have a truly fun & 'funny', unexpected sense of almost child-like humor & levity in them, that make me chuckle & laugh... therefore "GOOD MEDICINE" in my book!... So keep-em-comin K.!!!... & "Write On!!!"...
- OIN
- OIN
19th May 2013 6:53pm
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30th Jun 2013 8:29pm
A real funny poem. it made me laugh so much. write some more and keep me smiling.
